FREAKING MIGRAINES, MAN.

Anyway.

I’m trying to edit Prime so that it sucks less. I’m to the point in the story where the main character, 27, is talking to the imaginary unit i. And of course I wrote the damn thing in first-person, so I’m getting phrases like:

• “i and I”
• “I said to i“
• “i was no longer there, leaving me alone in the space”
• “it occurred to me that i was leading me in a circle”

What in the nightmarish hell was I thinking.

No one will ever want to read this nonsense.