The next draft of my story is DONE!

I went through the previously completed draft and tightened things up a bit, making the tone a bit more consistent and fixing the timeline so that all the dates made sense. There are a few other things I want to mention/include/reiterate that will make things more cohesive and (hopefully) make the “meaning” of the whole thing make more sense, but I think I need to take another break from it so that I can re-read it with fresh eyes and see exactly what needs to be in there and what doesn’t.

WOO PROGRESS!